Please help improve my script

[demigraff]

[kiram]

i like it--a lot!

[wohermiston]

This is nice. I have been recording my own scripts and one of the most powerful things I have done is to use my name. Personalizing the script really helps I think. But in generic scripts that cannot be known. So it may be an interesting twist to impose a nickname on the listener. and use that sprinkled throughout to better personalize the suggestions. also, i think you might add that in addition to feeling safe, that the diaper will protect you from embarrasment and also give great confidence. Hope that is helpful.

[stan]

if a person wanted to chain a few file bodies together you could create a wakener.

that also re-triggers any effects from the preceeding files and acts as the very first reinforcement of the idea

[Duckypin]

wohermiston, great suggestions! I like it a lot. I also like the idea of personalizing the script as well as my own voice leading me into trance. It is my voice engaging my subconscious to encourage the process.

Thanks!

[demigraff]

[demigraff]

OK, the file is up now ^_^ Any reviews much welcome. This was a first recording attempt, and I mixed up the words a little, but I think it should be just as good.