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[User517]

Interesting idea, but might need a bit more work.

Didn't listen to the whole file, or trance to it since I was just checking out what was in it, but have a few comments. You may want to mention that this is a curse file with suggestions that cannot be removed ever. Some people prefer having this kind of information before listening to the file and it acts as a bit of a disclaimer. You may also want to use a bit more gradual induction before instilling any triggers or suggestions as some people take a bit longer to go under, and at least from what I've noticed, triggers usually need to be done once the person has gone completely under for them to take properly. You may also want to have a more pronounced awakener and change the final bits slightly. Usually people can't do anything so articulate as taking pictures, or posting them on a website while they're still in a "sleeping" state. Instead you may wish to implant a suggestion to encourage posting pictures, or use a trigger which strengthens this desire that the file ends with after awakening. Making it a bit more generic as to where these images are posted might also work a bit better, although not as fun from your perspective.

The voice still seems a bit off. Too many odd pauses and strange pronunciations (accent withstanding) which may lead to diminished results. Maybe try writing the script a bit more phonetically for translation, and give it a once over in a sound editor to smooth things out a bit. It's more work, but should be easier to listen to. As it's a synthesized voice, there will always be some bad spots, but most of them could probably be sorted out.

I'm sorry if this comes off as being too negative, I'm just putting forth my opinion in case you were looking for them. You can always just dismiss it since I didn't trance to it, so don't know how others will actually react. I'm also not a particular expert on this matter, and am mostly going off the structure and methods I've seen in other files rather than any first hand knowledge, so it is just an opinion.

[SDoll]

I listened to Sissy Surprise and I like the mix. But I have to ask, what happened to your Rubber Doll file!? I want to be a sexy rubber doll. :(

[User517]

[Calimore]

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