I downloaded a few of your files from warpmymind.
-Change your mic/mic position so your breathing doesnt make sounds
-Don't suggest that someone will come back to your file. Why are they coming back? what FEELING will make them come back? Suggest that.
-I dont like to even talk about the "file" in recordings. I think it breaks the fourth wall, so to speak.
- Make your suggestions flow in, almost like conversation. You tend to say suggestions kind of harsh like "GO DEEPER." This may work on some people, but the majority of people will find this abrasive. Make it flow.
-Your audio cuts in and out sometimes. make sure it doesnt do that.
-You're using stories as a method of suggestion. This is good.
-Sometimes you raise your voice suddenly. I think you may raise it a little too much.
-I wouldnt say "zero" so much unless it happens to be a trigger you have implanted.
-You are suggesting in the present tense. this is very good! Many hypnotists make a mistake with this.
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-The text to speech is pretty good. But it talks a little too fast for me.
-The piano sounds a little funny, im not sure what it is (it sounds okay in the second half of the file. its actually pretty good.)
-The audio gain seriously changes halfway through. Make sure it sounds even and doesnt change.