Script prototype: TV Incontinence

[demigraff]

[demigraff]

I recorded a quick attempt of this first draft. As usual, I fluffed the lines and ended up repeating myself a bit too much. Still, 70 downloads in the time it took me to complain about a tax error is quite impressive :-)

Anyone want to make a suggestion or two (based on either the script or the file)?

[EntrancedVulpine]

Just adding my thoughts on this file: I actually feel that the repetition made it easier to simply ease my mind into a sense of autopilot. It made it much harder to remember anything after the file. I blacked out while listening, and literally found myself already standing up while soaking my diaper as I regained consciousness. It was very surreal. I remember feeling an embarrassed "oh god" moment when I woke up and realized this; I ran to turn off the media player as it had already begun looping (damn repeat xP).

I can't offer my criticism, as I honestly have no real recollection of the individual parts and phrases of the file. >.< Definitely had an effect on me though! I enjoyed it very much. :3

[demigraff]

Thanks :)

I've just started writing another new script, with another story about a little girl. Maybe if you're interested in trying it, you could leave some suggestions. I'm about to post the first bit in a new thread in this forum.