"Brains In Your Dick" file script. Thoughts?

[xavious]

[sarnoga]

[xavious]

[Jeshi]

This is a very very good script. I think if you have the right equipment you should at least try recording it after revising it some.

I do agree with pretty much everything Sarnoga said. If it's supposed to be just a body it has a very long introductions. It's a well written introduction but it drags on, especially if there's supposed to be another induction and deepeer before it.

I remember I saw a similar file concept on the voting page, the only difference was that that file idea was "When your penis become erect the head between your legs becomes dominant and you only need to think with your penis. But when you are not turned on then the head on your shoulders is dominant and you don't need to think about sex." which seemed to be more about not being able to resist arousal than it was about becoming more horny in general.

But both are very good and someday I would love to listen to both.

If you /really/ don't like the sound of your voice then I'm sure you could find somebody that loves this script who would be willing to record it.

[xavious]

[Jeshi]

[xavious]

...which is why I'm not intending to release any of this because it's vastly unfinished. But again; I'm musing ideas and seeing what works. I was looking more for comments on the aim of the file, but I posted the script because I'd already written so much of it and thought that it'd be interesting to see how people felt about my rough style.

Then again some of my favourite files are ones I can leave on in the background while I do other things. Sometimes it's just fun to hear Sarnoga or Jekket talk in the background.

Plus everyone is different and not everybody responds the same way to hypnosis. I like a long and eloquent file full of imagery and ideas to slowly work me under. I'm a difficult subject so I value some repetition to ensure I'm going under and my mind fully understands what is trying to be done to it. I wrote the files mainly for myself which is why I focused on the same style.

I don't expect to be posting anything to the site any time this century.

[0turner0]

Personally, I enjoyed the hell out of it :)

Started reading it aloud to myself without even looking at the rest, and before I knew it was having trouble even reading some of the rest once all my attention went down there :P

I agree with the comments about the negative phrasing though, it was pretty transparent what was meant with some of the sentences - but this was definitely an experience! Thanks!

[xavious]

Thank you 0turner0. I have seen some of your posts on here before and I am lead to believe that you are a fan of the jock/dumb/muscle type of files, correct?

I can see why people such as yourself would enjoy the concept behind this file.

I've always thought that if the eye is the window to the soul, then maybe the dick is the joystick to a man's soul, or at least to his mind. Men do often let themselves be lead by their dick, or at least do things based upon the promise of pleasure or sexual satisfaction.

I've often crudely thought of the jock persona being that they think almost entirely with their dick and do everything intending to 'score', whether that be with a girl or on the field.

I think that men are lead by their dicks more then they care to admit and in many ways I can see why they would want to and also why it would be quite desirable.

Our heads are so full of knowledge, feelings and thoughts that it can become quite a headache to do day to day things or to focus on the more pleasant things in life like simple pleasure.

The head between our legs, our 'cock' head, tends to want such simpler things and these are usually much easier to understand and achieve.

Letting the head between your legs fill your body with testosterone so that you can follow a simple set of instructions and perform better to win a game is easy. Girls are impressed by your athletic skills and how muscular and dominant you are, especially when you fight other guys for her appreciation. All of this means that by simply thinking with the head between your legs you can get closer to pleasure and quicker to wonderful sexual satisfaction than you ever could with that convoluted mess of a head on your shoulders.

Thinking with your dick is simple and requires little effort or thought and allows you to focus on the things that bring you pleasure. Thinking with your head tends to hurt and make you focus on less pleasant things.

I know which I'd prefer.

I think that it's important that we don't completely neglect the head on our shoulders. After all it holds our eyes, ears, nose and mouth and we do need those in order to kiss and communicate. Our heads are also usually on full display and are what people can tend to judge us on initially when deciding if we are attractive or not. I guess we also do need to use our brains sometimes just so that our bodies still function correctly and to store game plans and stuff relating to sports and sex, but otherwise it's fairly useless.

Can I ask you in particular, but this extends to everybody else as well, but which parts in particular did you like and which you didn't? Also at what sort of point did you start to think more with your dick and how did it feel?

Also what sort of things, if any, would you love to see added to this file?

[CalMark]

I think I'm still learning how to think with my dick. I remember somebody telling me years ago that if I followed my dick, I'd never go wrong. I think that is true more often than it's not.

[lamaar]

I made a recording for myself; I'll let you know if I get any results.

[lamaar]

After masturbating this morning, I had an intense feeling that I was forgetting something that followed me for the next few hours. I went over everything it could possibly be and drew a blank, so I'm pretty sure it was the file. Additionally I got some very hard erections through the day, but that may just be due to how arousing I find this concept. Same goes for my listening habits. Side note: I am apparently much more hypnotically susceptible to my own voice than anyone else's.

[xavious]

I completely forgot I posted this. Rather embarrassing because this was probably rather crap looking back.

I'm honoured you would choose to record your own version of this file lamaar. Did you change parts of the script for your recording, at all?

I'm also interested that the file had some affect of you.