Script WIP - Ocean of Consciousness

[Teknogeek]

[PeppermintT]

Very interesting

[jacquelinenow]

Hi Techno,

Thats a very interesting start. First impression was that the $3 words took me out of the flow you seem to be trying to create. If I'm deep enough, I usually don't notice any speed bumps with big words, but it takes being pretty deep. Just a suggestion to be aware of, as you add to the script.

Maybe add a short deepener phrase between the steps into the larger/stronger currents.

btw, what kind of induction are you thinking of using with this file? I'm not sure how to describe the different types I have used. The one that I think would work very well is an "energy" induction... you feel energy filling your [insert body part], filling with energy, relaxing... replacing tension and stress...

I'm looking forward to seeing more.. keep up the good work